User:AliAbbas4477/Artificial consciousness/Ajae Thompson Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

AliAbbas4477


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:AliAbbas4477/Artificial consciousness


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Artificial consciousness

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

The changes made for the addition to the article seem to be in line with the Wikipedia guidelines. Not only does the addition add valuable information but it also poses some interesting and thought provoking questions throughout. The draft also adds a different direction to the original article, but not one that skews away from the general concept and idea of it. I think the addition is looking good so far and am curious to see where it will go in the near future.