User:Aliahmed.57/Islamophobia in the media/Faith211 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

(provide username)   Aliahmed.57


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Editing User:Aliahmed.57/Islamophobia in the media - Wikipedia


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Islamophobia in the media - Wikipedia

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

I like the lead or introduction in your article. I think your doing a good job adding your own information that you found. This article seems very interesting and it was easy and flowed well while reading. Under the "United States" I would add ore new information to provided in. I think you can find a lot of information and it will help your article more. Also, under "Social Media" you should add more. I think it will make your article more interesting and will give readers a better understanding. Your references are well used and you did a good job using them. Overall it is good and clean, I would just keep finding new information for each category to help this article become better.