User:Aliahmed.57/Islamophobia in the media/Sparksc760 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

(Aliahmed57)


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Aliahmed.57/Islamophobia_in_the_media?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

'''When I read through this article, I first noted how it really was structured very neatly and did not have any rough edges or inconsistencies, which I have found with many wikipedia articles. The article opens up in a great way by starting with historical context which gives a great background for the reader, especially myself since it was a topic I do not know enough about compared to my peers I would assume. The breakdown of the different countries and areas around the world in which this article covers also helps give deeper insight into what the reader is actually supposed to understand and notice in our modern world. With the breakdown of different regions of the world, it also helps give context to how this is not an isolated issue, but a worldwide problem. The sources and references also are well placed and spot on to help the reader gauge a deeper understanding of the events or issues that are taking place in our modern world.'''