User:Alice4104/Amelia Smith Calvert/Iwishmycatcouldtalk Peer Review

General info

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Alice4104


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 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Alice4104/Amelia_Smith_Calvert?preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Amelia Smith Calvert

Lead
I think the lead is a little long considering the short length of the entire article. It seems like the two main things she is known for are what she studied and who she was married to. I think the specific schools she attended could go in the "Life" section.

Do you have a source for her birth and death dates? Those might have days, or even a general month, for you to be able to add.

You might also consider referencing the book she and her husband wrote here.

Content
I would love to hear more about what she did in Costa Rica. Are you able to read some of the book that they wrote together? That might touch on the kind of actual research she did.

Sources and References
The Cadwaller reference looks like it was full of good information. I love it when stuff works out like that!

It looks like you have access to some of her personal diaries. Is there any information in there about the specifics of her research, or what her and her husband's family was like? I think it would be cool to have a larger 'career' section and maybe even a personal life section if you can find enough stuff for it.

All the links seem to work, they just all need to be grouped together in one section. Are you having issues citing your sources using the template? It looks as if the two different references sections contain different citations, all of which seem like they're good, relevant sources for your article.

Organization
I would recommend moving the info box back to the right side of the page, because I believe that's something that's standardized on Wikipedia

Do articles that talk about the "standard author abbreviation" typically discuss it twice? I think having it appear in the info box is probably fine, unless the information generally does get repeated.

I also have a few spelling and grammar notes:

"She attended Pennsylvania state university and has graduated in 1899 where she got her degree in science and studied botany. She would serve as a demonstrator in zoology at Pennsylvania university, But would start a research fellowship at Bryn Mayr College." should probably be:

"She studied Botany at Pennsylvania State University and graduated in 1899. She would serve as a demonstrator in Zoology at Pennsylvania University, and would go on to start a research fellowship at Bryn Mawr College."

"Amelia Smith Calvert was a demonstrator inzoology at the Pennsylvania state university. where she was a graduate student from 1904 to 1906. In 1909 Amelia Smith Calvert moved to Costa Rica with Philip Powell Calvert, where he would carry out entomological research for two years. While spending these two years in Costa Rica Amelia Smith Calvert would go on to study the inhabitants of the flora.In the year 1910 Amelia Smith Calvert had returned from her trip with Philip Powell Calvert, where she had studied the Fauna and Flora that in inhabitant Costa Rica. In the year of 1917 Amelia Smith Calvert and [[Philip Powel Calvert] had written and published a book A Year Of Costa Rican Natural History in reference to the Fauna and Flora She had Studied when she was in Costa Rica." should probably be:

Amelia Smith Calvert was a demonstrator in zoology at the Pennsylvania State University where she was a graduate student from 1904 to 1906. In 1909 Calvert moved to Costa Rica with her husband Philip Powell Calvert, where he would carry out entomological research for two years. While spending these two years in Costa Rica, Amelia Smith Calvert studied the Fauna and Flora that in inhabitant Costa Rica. In 1917, Amelia Smith Calvert and Philip Powel Calvert wrote and published their book A Year Of Costa Rican Natural History.

I think the rest of the text of the article largely restates sentences from these passages, I assume because you were still in the middle of figuring out what text should go in which sections.