User:Aliciab5334/Regina Gwynn/Anthonyn256 Peer Review

General info
(Aliciab5334)
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 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:Aliciab5334/Regina Gwynn - Wikipedia
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Article Strengths

 * Natural tone
 * Mutiple sources of information
 * Great information Structure
 * all information is backed up by resource
 * links work
 * spelling and grammar

Areas of opportunity

 * the word only kind of sounds a little bias in the sentence she was only 9 years old maybe just she was 9 years old
 * using headers for the different sections instead of just bold text
 * could use maybe 1 or 2 more articles

Overall
great job team Regina Gwynn this article is really good great information most things i found were opportunities for the article were visual just breaking up sections with headers instead of bold text and the word only in the sentence listed above great job covering the topic staying natural pulling from resources and organizing the information