User:Aliroc065/Madam C. J. Walker Manufacturing Company/Skywalker501 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

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 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
It looks like there is not anything about her college education in the wiki page, so this is great info! There is some info about her hair loss in the original article though, so be careful not to have repetitive information! It looks like so far, your information is over-arching information, so try to get some really detailed information to put in there and help it stand out! There is a ton of info in the original article so I'm excited to see what you will have in the end!