User:Aliroc065/Madam C. J. Walker Manufacturing Company/TheWetWonder Peer Review

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Aliroco65


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 * User:Aliroc065/Madam C. J. Walker Manufacturing Company


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Madam C. J. Walker Manufacturing Company

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The lead is good. The Content is interesting. The tone and balance was implemented in a constructive manner. Source checks out. There seems to be nothing wrong with your organization. I was left with a funny impression after seeing this article, like I feel you just want this Wikipedia thing to be over, given that you have one source at the end of each paragraph lol, and don't really go too much into any actual detail. If I'm wrong and you're truly struggling, that's awful and I hope you can pull this off, but I mean c'mon it's Madam C.J Walker (who has an infinitely cooler maiden name) there's gotta be like a bunch of sources on one of the "Celebrate Black History Month with..." faces. Remember when Dr. Martin said anyone have anything to say about Wikipedia and all these kids said all of the worst things like "yeah this ties in well with the class" like I seriously doubt any of those shoe lickers actually want to do this assignment, well except maybe, Seth, he's on his own level. That being said, you should probably get more sources, or at least make it obvious you have more sources, one ain't good chief. I don't know if you'll even read this all the way because I know I wouldn't, but yeah you should probably get another source.