User:Alisa yoshi/sandbox

Val Attenbrow

evaluating content: basic understandings of Attenbrow of where she attended school and what she specializes in the archaeological field.

there should be more information on what she does in her fieldwork. It seems very general on what she does, if it had more detail it would make it more interesting. straightforward, nothing was out of place. in general, more could be added about possibly specific assignments she had in field and things she found out about the Aborigines and their tool usage. evaluating tone: unbiased facts. most things on her page are underrepresented because it is vague. evaluating sources: most links work, but one could not be found; needs to be updated? looks like the sources come from the same 2-3 websites, not much variety. Talk page: doesnt look like there are people talking about her page. rated "stub class" and "low importance".