User:Alisha2003/Health care in California/Haydenrandolph Peer Review

General info
Alisha2003
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:Medi-Cal
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Health care in California

Evaluate the drafted changes
Alisha added to the section "Medi-Cal" in the article "Health care in California." She introduces the Affordable Care Act and the Covered California Program under the the Affordable Care Act. The lead to what she added clearly states what the Affordable Care Act is. It is concise as it is not over detailed. I can tell what the section will be about from her lead and the simple introduction of what the Affordable Care Act is assumes the reader doesn't have the knowledge of what it is so is good she clearly and concisely explains.

The content she added is up to date as both her sources were from 2017 and 2014. She provided relevant statistics to elaborate on the topic of Health care in California. I think adding to this section to include Affordable Care Act in California and the Covered California Program is essential in understanding the topic so it is helpful she added to this section and provided up to date information to better understand the overall topic. There is not a lot of information on the article therefore this content added is crucial.

The content added is neutral and not biased because it provides facts and statistics. It does not persuade the reader one way or another. It more so informs the reader what the Affordable Care Act in California is and the aftermath of it shown with statistics on the Covered California Program.

All the content added is backed up by two reliable secondary sources. Especially because she provides great statistics, it is good that she also cites her sources and they are reliable. The content accurately reflect what the sources say. The sources are current, one is from 2014 and the other is from 2018. They are both thorough and written by various different authors. Both the links work.

The content added is easy to read and it is helpful that she clearly and concisely describes what the Affordable Care Act in California is so it sets up the rest of the section up nicely. It is organized and there were no grammatical errors that I caught.

There were no images or media added which could be something to think about adding because in the main article there are none. It could be a nice addition.

Overall, I was happy to see that this section was added because it is an important aspect of Health care in California and shouldn't go unnoticed. Therefore, it improved the overall quality of the article. The strengths include that the content added included important statistics that show how significant of an effect the Affordable Care Act has had on millions of people. This gives the reader a sense of how large and notable it is. Although it provided good statistics, I think an improvement could be to add more detail and go more in depth about it. Maybe there are sources that provide case studies to make the section more complete. Overall, interesting to read and learn about!