User:Alishajorji/OLES2129

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Activity 2

Feral child

The very first version of the article is incredibly limited, with only a sentence or two to describe what a feral child is. In order to improve the article, I would have added more detail to the page, including a definition of what the term actually meant and provided some background information. There’s also no citations to support where the information has come from, therefore there is no certainty that it is credible. There are also no click-throughs or examples of what a feral child is (although these are added into the second version). Another improvement to the article would be to add images or some form of visual to the page to make It more engaging to readers.

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Activity 1

Cordes-sur-Ciel

The article only has a few sources and since it is a historical piece, adding more sources would definitely elevate it's rating. It also jumps between English and French which makes it confusing for readers. Whilst I think using both language is important, it needs to be structured more clearly. Perhaps have the section in French and then it's direct English translation underneath instead of switching between the two.

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Activity 1

Lettuce

1) The number of sources (in this case 56)

2) Substantial overview of lettuce from a neutral perspective

3) A clear structure with several headings, in chronological order

4) The inclusion of media and nutrition tables

5) Good length and remains focused on the topic of lettuce

Activity 2

Link to selected wikipedia article.

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Author: Fiona Hutton, unable to find much information about the author however it the acknowledgements it states the book began as a university thesis for Oxford, thus Hutton is an academic. This makes the source credible as it has been well researched.

It was published in London in 2013.

Hutton looks at Manchester and Oxford to provide a comparative history of anatomical study. Using the Anatomy Act as a focal point, she examines how these two cities dealt with the need for bodies over two centuries. This directly ties to the case of the murders as they were killing people to use their bodies for anatomical study due to the shortage.

It is a factual source.

It opens up with the Anatomy Act which provides historical scope and then goes into her research.

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Activity Finding Images for Article. (Due to the nature of the article, I will not be using images of the missing girl or her family out of respect to their privacy)

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