User:Alisondoepker/William Kretzschmar/Ravenrolle Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Alisondoepker


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Alisondoepker/William_Kretzschmar?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

The lead is strong and very informative, however there is an incomplete sentence; "Little is known about Kretzschmar's early life. He is originally from..."

Overall, the article is put together very well. My only critique is to potentially collect more sources and put more info on his early life if possible.