User:Aliyahm/Choose an Article

Article Selection
Please list articles that you're considering for your Wikipedia assignment below. Begin to critique these articles and find relevant sources.

Option 1

 * Article title
 * Peptide vaccine


 * Article Evaluation
 * This article's content is relevant to the situation and cites a couple of relevant sources. It comes across as neutral in tone. It is very short, and with the addition of more information, for example, from the articles linked below, could be organized into sections regarding the topic. It could include more information on why synthetic long peptides could show promising results, and/or how those results came about.


 * Sources
 * https://www.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/pmc/articles/PMC4494216/
 * https://www.frontiersin.org/articles/10.3389/fimmu.2018.01043/full
 * https://www.frontiersin.org/articles/10.3389/fimmu.2018.00884/full

Option 2

 * Article title
 * Durbar festival


 * Article Evaluation
 * This article could dive deeper into the history and customs behind the festival, as well as what exactly the festival involves. It could also give some background as to what Ramadan is and why it is celebrated for the two Eids. The celebration customs and what the festival involves could comprise another new section to make the article more organized. When referencing Eid, the words should be capitalized in the article as well. The existing content, however, is still relevant and neutral.


 * Sources
 * https://www.cnn.com/2017/07/03/africa/gallery/durbar-festival-in-northern-nigeria/index.html
 * https://www.pulse.ng/lifestyle/food-travel/sallah-celebrations-the-jjcs-guide-to-enjoying-the-durbar-festival-in-nigeria/2c4s1kj

Option 3

 * Article title
 * Mansionair


 * Article Evaluation
 * The article could improve by actually mentioning the trio's names within the article as well as how they came to be a trio. A picture of the trio or them performing would also aid the article in my opinion, as well as more information on the trio's "sound" as the artists describe it themselves, or critiques. The article could also include more information on their EP. The article's is written neutrally and all material on it is relevant, as well as cited.


 * Sources
 * https://www.onestowatch.com/artist/mansionair
 * https://www.thelineofbestfit.com/reviews/albums/mansionair-shadowboxer-album-review

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