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Article chosen: Jazz Dance


 * The tone of the article needs to be changed. The page also says that it needs to be looked at by an expert in dance.


 * Look at title. Not just a dance but a technique with different branches of styles and techniques.


 * Revamp the History section of the article. It is so short and glosses over the entire history of the creation of jazz. Also, this section currently does not have any mentions of how it became popular and which codified techniques are taught today.


 * The Notable Figures section also needs to be edited. Some of these figures either have no relation to the technique or are of such little importance that they should not be on this list. This list of notable people should be comprised of choreographers, teachers and performers.


 * Rather than a section of Elements of Jazz Dance try creating a section about the Characteristics of Jazz Dance

Sources History citation: edited by Lindsay Guarino and Wendy Oliver. Jazz Dance : a History of the Roots and Branches. Gainesville :University Press of Florida, 2014. Print. citation: CAYOU, DOLORES KIRTON. "The Origins of Modern Jazz Dance." Black Scholar, vol. 42, no. 2, Summer2012, pp. 8-13.
 * Jazz Dance: a history of the roots and branches.
 * The Origins of Modern Jazz Dance.