User:Alizebasultoibarra/Huerta, Leticia/ElijahBruin Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Alize Basulto Ibarra


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Alizebasultoibarra/Huerta,_Leticia?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
This draft is great, the tone is neutral and the content covered gives a good overview of the artists work and the materials they use. I appreciate the formatting of this draft as it is easy to read and the notable projects are made very clear. Another aspect of this draft that I think is really well done is the use of quotes, as it adds a personalization to the article without sacrificing any of the neutrality. My only critiques of this draft are regarding the wikipedia formatting. Im not even clear on the exact formatting myself but I believe that adding citations within the text using the cite feature on the website would help. Another thing that I believe is optional but I think would make the page a bit more engaging is including photos, even generic photos can serve as a visual aid that catches a readers attention or conveys quick information.