User:Aljgm6/Tan Yunxian/Janbcb Peer Review

General info
Aljgm6
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:Aljgm6/Tan Yunxian
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Tan Yunxian

Content
Guiding questions:


 * Is the content added relevant to the topic?
 * The added quote fits beautifully with the rest of the content.
 * Is the content added up-to-date?
 * Yes, the source is from 3 years ago
 * Is there content that is missing or content that does not belong?
 * Does the article deal with one of Wikipedia's equity gaps? Does it address topics related to historically underrepresented populations or topics?
 * Absolutely. The whole article itself kind of opens itself up to it and this quote helps tremendously.

Tone and Balance
Guiding questions:


 * Is the content added neutral?
 * It's a quote. Yes, quote is neutral.
 * Are there any claims that appear heavily biased toward a particular position?
 * No
 * Are there viewpoints that are overrepresented, or underrepresented?
 * Within the section, no. This section is about this subject and the material added is relevant, not overdoing it.
 * Does the content added attempt to persuade the reader in favor of one position or away from another?
 * It does not.

Sources and References
Guiding questions:


 * Is all new content backed up by a reliable secondary source of information?
 * Yes, the content added is a direct quote.
 * Does the content accurately reflect what the cited sources say? (You'll need to refer to the sources to check this.)
 * Yes, the content added is a direct quote.
 * Are the sources thorough - i.e. Do they reflect the available literature on the topic?
 * Are the sources current?
 * Yes, 2021
 * Are the sources written by a diverse spectrum of authors? Do they include historically marginalized individuals where possible?
 * Is the nature of the article, yes
 * Check a few links. Do they work?
 * No new links were added

Organization
Guiding questions:


 * Is the content added well-written - i.e. Is it concise, clear, and easy to read?
 * Yes
 * Does the content added have any grammatical or spelling errors?
 * No
 * Is the content added well-organized - i.e. broken down into sections that reflect the major points of the topic?
 * This quote is a lot of text but I don't think it's too much.

'''I do think more than just one quote and one reference should be added for this entire project. It seems like very little work was done outside of class. I do think the quote, if it is direct, should be in actual quotations or formatted in a blockquote.'''