User:Aljill/Anne Fletcher/Cadebabade Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Aljill (Alison's) - Anne Fletcher


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Aljill/Anne_Fletcher?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Anne Fletcher

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

Content
I think the content you have added is incredibly relevant to her life and for emphasizing the importance of her work.

Towards the end, with the last two/three paragraphs, it feels very list-y. You've improved it from what it was in the original but you could make even further strides if you were able to make it flow more smoothly like you do when moving between talking about Step Up and 27 Dresses. Potentially incorporating the line about disenchanted into the previous paragraph. Unless there is more to say about each of the films singled out in the paragraphs I recommended combining them into one paragraph as they are all more recent and less impactful that her first two. (side note: does Hocus Pocus 2 have a rotten tomatoes score yet?)

Another thing. I'm not sure if it is really applicable here but there is not much in the way her directorial style written in the article or your edits. I think it could add a lot if you can find it. But I also don't know if that is something that is relevant to her work of the significance sits more in how much she has done and achieved rather than the content of her films.

Overall though, I think you've done a really good job at adding content that elevates the article's quality

Tone and Balance
You did a very good job at literally just stating facts. Not an opinion in sight haha :)

As mentioned previously it would be nice to add components that aren't straight statistics. It's lacking the social side of her work.

Sources and References
Because she is a modern figure a lot of these sources are from news publications, mostly entertainment sources that are known to be reliable or at least well versed in the film industry.

If it is possible to find offline sources (like from the databases we have access to) about her that'd be great but I don't think it is necessary for the quality of this article. I think these types of sources would allow you to get more about her as a director and her style rather than just the work that she did.

RESPONSE:

-I will make the two bottom paragraphs into one.

-There are not a lot of sources that discuss her style and the themes in her work because unfortunately, rom coms don't get a lot of critical recognition aside from opinionated reviews.

-Thank you!