User:Alkemiya/User:Tristan-Xin/sandbox/Tetraphenylporphine Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing? Tristan-Xin
 * Link to draft you're reviewing: User:Tristan-Xin/sandbox

Lead
Guiding questions:


 * Has the Lead been updated to reflect the new content added by your peer?
 * Yes, the Lead of the article was formulated from scratch.
 * Does the Lead include an introductory sentence that concisely and clearly describes the article's topic?
 * Yes, but it could be slightly reworded (substitution: refer to → are).
 * Does the Lead include a brief description of the article's major sections?
 * It gives an overview rather than a header by header description, which I would regard as sufficient.
 * Does the Lead include information that is not present in the article?
 * No.
 * Is the Lead concise or is it overly detailed?
 * The Lead is short and to-the-point.

Content
Guiding questions:


 * Is the content added relevant to the topic?
 * Yes.
 * Is the content added up-to-date?
 * Yes, the majority is very recent.
 * Is there content that is missing or content that does not belong?
 * None that I can identify.

Tone and Balance
Guiding questions:


 * Is the content added neutral?
 * Yes.
 * Are there any claims that appear heavily biased toward a particular position?
 * None.
 * Are there viewpoints that are overrepresented, or underrepresented?
 * None.
 * Does the content added attempt to persuade the reader in favor of one position or away from another?
 * It does not.

Sources and References
Guiding questions:


 * Is all new content backed up by a reliable secondary source of information?
 * Yes, appropriate reviews are included.
 * Are the sources thorough - i.e. Do they reflect the available literature on the topic?
 * To my knowledge they are comprehensive.
 * Are the sources current?
 * Yes.
 * Check a few links. Do they work?
 * They do.

Organization
Guiding questions:


 * Is the content added well-written - i.e. Is it concise, clear, and easy to read?
 * Yes, it is very clear.
 * Does the content added have any grammatical or spelling errors?
 * Occasional typos are present and easily removed.
 * Is the content added well-organized - i.e. broken down into sections that reflect the major points of the topic?
 * Yes, the organization is clear.

Images and Media
Guiding questions: If your peer added images or media


 * Does the article include images that enhance understanding of the topic?
 * The orbital visualizations are excellent (they benefit from the use of a transparent background) and explicit connections are drawn between these visualization and the bonding of such compounds.
 * Are images well-captioned?
 * The captions are clear.
 * Do all images adhere to Wikipedia's copyright regulations?
 * Yes.
 * Are the images laid out in a visually appealing way?
 * See above.

For New Articles Only
If the draft you're reviewing is a new article, consider the following in addition to the above.


 * Does the article meet Wikipedia's Notability requirements - i.e. Is the article supported by 2-3 reliable secondary sources independent of the subject?
 * Yes, there are sufficient reviews to support this.
 * How exhaustive is the list of sources? Does it accurately represent all available literature on the subject?
 * It appears sufficiently complete.
 * Does the article follow the patterns of other similar articles - i.e. contain any necessary infoboxes, section headings, and any other features contained within similar articles?
 * Yes, it has a consistent format.
 * Does the article link to other articles so it is more discoverable?
 * Yes.

Overall impressions
Guiding questions:


 * Has the content added improved the overall quality of the article - i.e. Is the article more complete?
 * The article has been brought into existence.
 * What are the strengths of the content added?
 * Very good electronic rationales for (and comprehensive coverage of) the synthesis and reactivity of nontrigonal pnictogens.
 * How can the content added be improved?
 * This would benefit strongly from a systematic comparison across pnictogen congeners, if that exists in the literature.

Overall evaluation
Very strong article complemented by comprehensive schemes and clear visualizations. Essentially ready for publication.