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Good evaluation Allany.

Article Evaluated: Retort pouch

Some questions to note
 * Is everything in the article relevant to the article topic? Is there anything that distracted you?
 * The section about reception seemed slightly out of place and it was a little distracting. It felt a little subjective. Also, the last part of the section with the millennial note seemed unnecessary.
 * Is the article neutral? Are there any claims, or frames, that appear heavily biased toward a particular position?
 * The article seemed fairly neutral.
 * Are there viewpoints that are overrepresented, or underrepresented?
 * The viewpoints seemed fairly neutral. The section on reception focuses mostly on the reception in the United States and does not go into detail of countries that accept retort pouches. Even though this product is used internationally, there is a United States bias in the article. The article also, only focuses on the MRE applications to the technology. They don't really go into depth about the type of processing.
 * Check a few citations. Do the links work? Does the source support the claims in the article?
 * Half of the web citations do not work. There are also citations to manufacturer websites. These sources may be biased.
 * Is each fact referenced with an appropriate, reliable reference? Where does the information come from? Are these neutral sources? If biased, is that bias noted?
 * Since most of the sources are not verifiable, the sources cited are not reliable. Also, there may be a bias since there was information taken from manufacturer websites instead of scientific review articles. It is unsure on whether there is a manufacturer bias or this is information that is collectively agreed upon in the field/industry.
 * Is any information out of date? Is anything missing that could be added?
 * There could further information on why and how the retort pouches survive sterilization and the processes involved. There could be more information added about the affect in food processing.
 * Check out the Talk page of the article. What kinds of conversations, if any, are going on behind the scenes about how to represent this topic?
 * The Talk page is empty.
 * How is the article rated? Is it a part of any WikiProjects?
 * It is rated as Start-Class and is part of the scope of WikiProjects Containers.
 * How does the way Wikipedia discusses this topic differ from the way we've talked about it in class?
 * It doesn't go into any detail on the processing pros and cons. There isn't really much on the types of retorts needed or what specific types of processing is used with retort pouches. It does go more into depth on the composition.

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