User:AllenCamp28/Cat anatomy/BubblyBublik Peer Review

General info
AllenCamp28, Vanessabear
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 * Cat anatomy
 * Cat anatomy

Evaluate the drafted changes
Lead

The article is straight forward, it seems a little short but very clear. Right away the reader will know what the article is going to be about only because of how well the article is worded.

Content

The content is up to date and was last edited on October 15, 2023. The content that is added is relevant to the topic, the article name is Cat Anatomy and throughout the article it has been strictly cat anatomy as well as physiology which are both relevant. The article does not go off topic, from the article not much is missing and there is a lot of good and educational points especially for cat lovers.

Tone and Balance

The article is very educational there is no bias and it is neutral. The article does not go off topic and covers the skeletal structure of the cat, muscular, nervous system, body temperature, and their role based on their skeletal structure such as cats having huge eye sockets which indicates that the animal is nocturnal.

Sources and References

There are plenty of sources added to the article however, some of them are out of date some dated back to 2004. While checking the articles the link works to the articles. The articles that were used in the article are good and are relevant to the topic.

Organization

The article is clear and well written. When reading the article I did not come across grammatical errors. The article has a lot of good information and professionally written.

Images and Media

In the article there was plenty of images that were relevant from the article. The pictures weren't just cute pictures of cats but it contained body features as well as what the cat is composed of. One example is the picture of the cats tongue, not only does the article write about the cats tongue but it visually shows the reader how it looks like. The images are laid out organized and well put together as well as they follow the wikipedia guideline. I also like how the article added a GIF of a cat running, I found it cool!

Overall impressions

Overall, the article is very interesting and something I would come back and review again, there is a lot of factual details put into the article. The article isn't too wordy and goes straight to the point.