User:Alli St. John/Zion National Park/KatF91 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Alli St. John


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Alli%20St.%20John/Zion_National_Park?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Zion National Park

Evaluate the drafted changes
You did a lot of great work on this page! The addition of park rules is very important for everyone to have quick access. I liked how you split it up by rules at the park and then regulations that humans need to abide by while at the park. I would maybe try to add some photos and links to other wiki sites like one for cyanotoxins.