User:Alli St. John/Zion National Park/Mangodulce Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Alli St. John


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Alli%20St.%20John/Zion_National_Park?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

Woah so cool you added information about cyanobacteria in relation to drinking water! I would maybe change this section to be called "Water Safety" or "Drinking Water Safety"

I think it is great you added a rules and regulation section! This will defiantly make people more aware of the rules in the park

Not sure all the information that is included is needed as it is on the park website. Maybe try to just highlight the most important rules.