User:Alli St. John/Zion National Park/Rileysteg Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

(Alli St. John)


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Alli%20St.%20John/Zion_National_Park?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Zion National Park

Content
I think the content is very relevant to the article and to the class. Alli is drafting to add in rules and regulations of Zion National Park. I think this would be great for people planning to visit the park so they can learn more of what is expected of them before they visit. It may also ease people's anxieties that may not know what to expect when visiting a park.

Tone and Balance
I think the tone is very unbiased. The layout of the information is very straightforward and would make it easy for people to find what they are looking for. Alli does not come across as biased since she is simply reporting rules and regulations of the park.

Sources and References
All of Alli's sources are National Park website pages. I think there would be no better place to obtain information about rules, safety, and regulations about the park.

Organization
The layout is in a list-like format making it easily digestible. This also makes it easy to very quickly find the information that you are looking for.

Overall
It seems that Alli has managed to restate the rules and regulations and in my opinion, in a way that is even easier to understand than the NPS website.