User:Allie2004/Coral reef/Mimitee123 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Allie2004


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Allie2004/Coral_reef?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
I like your topic, as I am writing about something very similar where I mention the importance of coral reefs and what they contribute to the ocean. You have a few grammar/sentence issues that you need to fix specifically in your first sentence and a few others but that is something you can easily fix. Your explanations are brief but they get the point across where I can easily understand which I think is great and all of your sources work. I think you did a great job.