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Talk:Cleopatra II

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I chose to evaluate this article because I love ancient cultures, especially ancient Egypt. I think Cleopatra is a girl boss and find her so interesting!

Evaluate the article
The article was neutral which was good. It also had a good first sentence that summed up the contents of the article. Overall, I feel it was a bit messy and hard to follow. There were so many dates and not a lot of explanation. The language was hard to follow and I think it just could have been written better, I would say it's underdeveloped. However, there was a lot of information in there and it seemed to be accurate. I would definitely use this article as a starting point for learning about The Miss Cleopatra.