User:Alliekohl/Manatee/Andy.thompson33 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Alliekohl


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Alliekohl/Manatee?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Manatee

Evaluate the drafted changes
In the edit of the Manatee Wikipedia page there seems to be a lot of good information about communication. I found it interesting how their ears are much bigger internally than externally. Adding more information would have been hard because this Wikipedia page already has a lot on the Manatee, but I think there are places were you could add more. The information that was added was intriguing, but I think the author should make the first line more clear. I do not understand when they say, "especially between cows and their calves". That part of the addition seems kind of thrown in their without a purpose. The source used is a scientific journal that was published through a very credible source. Overall, the information that was added was good and would contribute good information to the page.