User:Alliekohl/Manatee/Ossp001 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Alliekohl


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Alliekohl/Manatee?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Manatee

Evaluate the drafted changes
Before I start, I just wanted to say how much I love manatees, so I'm thrilled to be peer reviewing your article :). I saw you made a small addition to the communication section of your article, which is great! If possible, maybe look further into that article you found for reasons that they make certain sounds? Maybe there are sounds it makes on occasions when it feels threatened (though I know that there aren't really predators for manatees). Nice source, by the way! On another note, If you do end up working on conservation at all, could I suggest maybe adding something about how the scars on manatees from ship strikes help to identify each manatee (didn't see anything about it on the wikipedia article but it could be worth mentioning)? It's unfortunate, but helpful for conservationists from what I remember. Also, the Save the Manatee Club (it's briefly mentioned in the wikipedia article) has tons of events that help to raise money for conservation that you could potentially add onto your article. Great job so far! Keep up the good work :)