User:Allieserterides/Evaluate an Article

Which article are you evaluating?
Commercial art

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
I chose it because I'm interested in communications as a possible major and thought this would be a good topic to investigate because it would allow me to learn more while also being interesting. I also chose this article because it's pretty empty and seems like it needs help.

Evaluate the article
The lead section is informative and gets right to the point which is exactly what it's meant for. However, it does have a few grammatical errors that need fixing.

The content in the article is relevant however it is not up to date from the last four years. All of the sources are from 2018 or before. Also, to add to that, there are only 6 sources and overall this is a very short article.

The tone of the article is neutral and doesn't seem to skew any type of way.

While the article is organized, it's very vague and broad, thus needing more research.

There are only two images on the page and I feel that they could be better quality and there could also be more photos to help readers visualize.

The last edits on this page were done in November of 2021 and even those were only grammatical fixes.

Overall, I feel that this article is underdeveloped and could use more research, better photos, and just more information in general.