User:Allig11/Sports Medicine/Kaydaugherty Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Allig11


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 * User:Allig11/Sports Medicine
 * User:Allig11/Sports Medicine

Evaluate the drafted changes
Everything that you talked about in your proposal, and what you have added into your essay are really good! I like that you added the different professions in sport medicine, but I do think you should add citations into the different sections of professions to give readers more access to follow up on. I do think that overall the article needs more information in specific sections. There are a lot of details about sports medicine in different countries, I want to know about sports medicine in America since we live here! You could talk about sports medicine schools, what colleges that offer the education for that profession. "Education" could be a section added into your article. You could talk more in depth about sports medicine and what they do, possibly give facts about sports medicine with sports to give an idea to readers of what they do. "Facts" could also be a section to add into your article!

Is the content added relevant to the topic? Yes!

Is the content added well written? Yes, it was clear and easy to read

Is the article more complete? I think more overall needs to be added to make the article more complete.

Does the article include images? It does not

Check a few links, do they work? Yes

Is the content added up to date? Yes