User:Alligatoridae/Ameiurus brunneus/Resident Snake Wrangler Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Alligatoridae


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Alligatoridae/Ameiurus_brunneus?preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template#cite_note-:2-9


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * new article

Evaluate the drafted changes
I believe this is a great article that you've created from scratch.

I think your lead is strong, nice and concise. Perhaps you could add a brief explanation as to why there is little known about this fish. The last sentence of the lead, about its alias, is somewhat wordy and comes across a bit confusing. You briefly touch on each section of your article within the lead except for diet and conservation, if you think those are of great importance it may be beneficial to work a little info into the lead, if you can without oversaturating it.

I think the content is very interesting, it doesn't seem to be particularly lacking in any areas.

The article seems to take a very neutral and informative stance on the topic.

There are plenty of references. They look detailed and the links work fine. The paper by Jason (2015) has a red error on my end, "check date values in: | access-date"

I think the organization is good, broad to more of a focus on conservation. It may be interesting to see a historical section towards the beginning describing the context around how the species was described, if such info is available.

Some media or pictures of the bullhead would be a great addition to this article, I like the species box.

Really great work for a brand new article.

Overall I think you added a lot of good content.

I think most of your grammar is fine. But under habitat, you use a lot of commas and "and", I think you may be able to rewrite some it so it flows a little better, avoid back to back "and" in-between commas. You also refer to the fish as 'It', which still works, but it may flow nicer if it read something like: They, or, The bullhead has been found in slow shallow water as well as their preferred deep fast water. Nothing too bad for the grammar though, great article.