User:Allisonkirkpatrick/Mary Agnes Chase/Abomb66 Peer Review

== Wow, this is a pretty beefy page! I like the flow and neutrality of your life and career section, but do you know anything about her earlier life? It seems to jump right into her achievements but some background may help to humanize her. Just a suggestion, this section has good flow and information. Good intro the the suffrage movement! There is a ton of information here and you sources seem good. If anything, I think adding more about her scientific accomplishments in botany may help to balance the article a bit. That being said, I think you could add some more to the lead. There is a lot about her being a suffragist and that should probably go into the lead. Your structure is clear by and large, but it sometimes feels just a little bit jumpy between paragraphs, maybe edit some transitions a little bit. Compared to how much suffragist stuff there is, maybe consider adding some more stuff to the previous section. Overall you seems to keep a neutral tone with reliable sources, great start! ==