User:Allithegr8/The Ways of White Folks/Gmarinello19 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

(Allithegr8)


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * The Ways of White Folks


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * The Ways of White Folks

Evaluate the drafted changes
The sentences added to the lead add much needed detail for explaining what is within the Wikipedia Page. Adding the Background section for the novel is also very helpful and was absolutely necessary for enhancing the overall Wikipedia page. Adding the summary section for this page was perfect. Yes, the information about the novel is great, but having details about what is within the novel was done really well. The overall organization of the page is done well except that one part of the Wikipedia page that is confusing. This is about the two sections that are titled Reception. Overall, the Wikipedia page is great and provides much essential information about the novel. The summary and background was a great touch that enhanced the page. The only negative is the Reception part.