User:Allthelightsinmiami/Leslie B. McLemore/TurtlerLearner Peer Review

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Allthelightsinmiami
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Hello! I think that your current draft has a bunch of great and specific content which tells a lot about your subject. The only thing that I would really suggest is that you divide up what you have written into more headings. For instance instead of just having everything under "biography" I think that you should do the classic "early life/education", "career", and "family/personal life" headings as you have content for all those topics. Also I think you might have to find a way to add one or two more sources and fleshing our those headings could be a way to do that. good luck!