User:Allybio0258/Carcinogenic bacteria/Cg621 Peer Review

General info
Allybio0258
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing.
 * User:Allybio0258/Carcinogenic bacteria - Wikipedia
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Carcinogenic bacteria - Wikipedia

Evaluate the drafted changes.
The first thing I would like to point out that this article does well is that the article seems to have an overall neutral attitude. There is an update that pertains to the lead of the article, however, the edit to the lead seems to be missing a source. There is incorporated use of a table to describe the different types of carcinogenic bacteria and what cancers they are linked to, such as one edit being streptococcus anginous and its link to esophageal cancer. Another edit that I believed was well done was the discussion of helicobacter hepatitis and its effect on mice and how the bacteria give them hepatitis and liver cancer. I would, however, like to see more information of this study in the edit as well as a link to the source that it comes from. I believe that perhaps a little more can be added onto the "Known to cause cancer" heading of the article, as stated, like giving more information about Helicobacter hepatitis and the mice. There is a source provided on the subject, but an in-text citation should be incorporated into the edit. The edits made to the table of the article are missing in text citations as well and they are needed within the text. In the sandbox, there is a source that explains the bacteria linked to oral carcinogens, but I do not see that information featured in the article. The sources that are in the edit appear to be reliable, as they are all featured from medical journals, but they are not incorporated into the overall edits of the article. These sources should be incorporated into the article so that the reader may understand why these sources are relevant to the overall topic.