User:Allykwong/Choose an Article

Article Selection
Please list articles that you're considering for your Wikipedia assignment below. Begin to critique these articles and find relevant sources.

Option 1

 * Article title
 * Jasmine Choi


 * Article Evaluation
 * The lead in this article is very short and consists of only the topic and a few main ideas. It does not include brief descriptions of the articles's major sections, and can be expanded on. The content already written relates well with the topic as it is a short biography. Some content is not up to date and there is not much past 2016. The article is not a controversial topic, but focuses on achievements and performances. The article is divided into three sections, each can be more developed. While there are many pictures that can be included, the article does not currently have any photos, videos, or other media.


 * Sources
 * Jasmine Choi's own website https://www.jasminechoi.com/mobile/bioEng.php
 * Opera Musica biography http://www.straubingerflutes.com/artists.html

Option 2

 * Article title
 * Umeshu


 * Article Evaluation
 * This article on Japanese plum wine consist of only two sections. One of which is the lead, the other a short bullet point list of how it is made. The article doesn't have too much content, however the main idea of what it is and how it is made gives the reader a brief understanding of the topic. The tone of the article seems informal as sentences are concise and one section includes a list. Images include a photo of the drink and a Japanese style drawing.


 * Sources
 * https://www.justonecookbook.com/plum-wine/
 * http://www.thatslifegourmet.com/umeshu-so-much-more/

Option 3

 * Article title
 * Atomic Cartoons


 * Article Evaluation
 * This article includes three sections: the lead, history, and a list of productions. It includes a basic summary of the company's background such as where they are located and significant people that contributed. Besides history and the list of projects there is not much to this article. I think a few projects that are more popular can be highlighted on the page for it to be more recognizable to the audience. The tone of the article seems neutral because it is mostly providing facts and significant dates about the company, rather than opinions. An image of the logo is at the top of the page, but I think more can be included such as popular films.


 * Sources
 * https://atomiccartoons.com/

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