User:Allylynch1/Focus group/Acforlando Peer Review

Peer review
This is where you will complete your peer review exercise. Please use the following template to fill out your review.

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing? Allylynch1
 * Link to draft you're reviewing: User:Allylynch1/Focus group

Lead, content, tone, organization evaluation
Since there is no content except links on the page, I do not want to evaluate these sections.

Sources and References
Guiding questions:


 * Is all new content backed up by a reliable secondary source of information?
 * Are the sources thorough - i.e. Do they reflect the available literature on the topic?
 * Are the sources current?
 * Check a few links. Do they work?

Sources and references evaluation
All the links on the page refer to other Wikipedia articles that refer to focus groups in some capacity. I definitely think further content on focus groups could be added to any of these areas, or information on how focus groups are utilized could be added to this section. I believe this content is a good start. I would recommend adding some of the citations from your mini-paper to a bibliography page as a start.

Overall impressions
Guiding questions:


 * Has the content added improved the overall quality of the article - i.e. Is the article more complete?
 * What are the strengths of the content added?
 * How can the content added be improved?

Overall evaluation
Overall, this is a good start, but more work needs to be done in order to fully publish. I can't wait to see it!