User:Allyrun/Bob's Burgers/"Stanley2025" Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

allyrun


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 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Bob's Burgers

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

Hello Allyrun, i think it is good that the lead includes an introductory sentence that is clear and concisely explains what bobs burger is. I also like how the lead explains how bobs burgers came about and a little bit of the history behind it. The section you added about voice cast section is good because i feel like it is valid for people to know the voices behind the cast. your content is very relevant to the topic as well as the sections you are adding to fit very well in the section. The section about the halloween costumes is very interesting to because you talk about when it was first celebrated on the shoe and how the whole episode revolved around halloween. I think how you added in parts about who the characters are, is also really helpful because it lets the reader know who the author is talking about in that point in time. i also like how your editing format matches wikipedias format.