User:Allysch/Dissociative disorders/AngelOffley Peer Review

L General info
Allysch
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:Allysch/Dissociative disorders
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Dissociative disorders

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

Lead

The lead includes the new content about dissociative disorders involving involuntary dissociation as a defense mechanism and the role of trauma. It gives a pretty good overview! I think it would be beneficial to go into detail on the main sections like symptoms, causes, diagnosis, and treatment a bit more.

Content and Sources/References

The added content is definitely relevant and important! It covers the causes, mentioning both major trauma and less severe stressors, psychoactive substances, or no clear trigger. The information about medication (Aripiprazole, Olanzapine, Risperidone) managing symptoms but not curing the disorder, and psychotherapy being the best treatment is also really useful! I would make sure this content is backed by up-to-date, reliable sources.

Tone and Balance

The content added is neutral and informative, which is great!

Organization

The new content is well-written but could use a quick review for clarity and conciseness. It was a bit hard to follow, but that’s just personal opinion! I would ensure the new content is smoothly integrated by separating causes, symptoms, and treatment into distinct sections for better readability.

Images/Media

Images are optional, which is totally fine! If any images are included, they would definitely help explain the topic better though.