User:Allysch/Dissociative disorders/Cjaneellen Peer Review

General info
Allysch
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:Allysch/Dissociative disorders
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Conversion disorder

Evaluate the drafted changes
The content added is easy to read. The content is also relevant, up to date, and could potentially help in a base level understanding of the topic. However, the content is not free of grammatical errors and could be more concise in some areas in the first paragraph. For example, the first sentence states 'unconscious defense mechanism, wherein the individual with a dissociative disorder experiences separation in these areas as a means to protect against traumatic stress'. A more clear and concise way to put this may be 'The individual with the dissociative disorder experiences separation in the affects area as a means to protect against traumatic stress'. Although it is gathered that DID stands for dissociative disorders, this is not explicitly stated before the abbreviation is used. The content can be improved by improving the conciseness of the language used in the content that has been added.