User:Allyssa9501/Oshawa Centre/Otu.ak Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Allyssa9501


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Allyssa9501/Oshawa Centre


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Oshawa Centre

Evaluate the drafted changes
Hi Allyssa9501,

I really enjoyed your contribution to the Oshawa Center Wikipedia page. Your contribution is very informative and shows that you took the time to research the topic and incorporate relevant information.

I thought the sources that you used for the assignment were great sources. However, in order for me to know exactly where you incorporated each source, I must read both sources first and find it myself. This can be a bit of an inconvenience. Make sure that you embed the citation into the sentence that references the source you used, so the reader can quickly access the source.

I also would recommend you proofread your contribution again as there were a couple grammatical errors. However, there was nothing alarming that stood out.

Overall, I think you did a fantastic job on your contribution. Your contribution will have an immediate impact to the Oshawa Center Wikipedia page as it contains relevant and up to date information. Nice work and all the best!

Cheers,

Otu.ak