User:Almondblossoms1890/Entenza House/Chantelleh Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Almondblossoms1890


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Almondblossoms1890/Entenza House
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Entenza House
 * Entenza House

Evaluate the drafted changes
This is off to a really great start. I am impressed by how much you have already added to it. The tone of the article is neutral and balanced which is good. make sure you check grammar. In the last sentence of the proposed structure and materials section add "and" between plywood panels, and aluminum frame glass, and add a period at the end of the sentence. Also make sure the at the end of a paragraph that you cite your reference. The references that you have look good but you might consider adding a few more. I also think it would add a lot to your article if you add a couple of reference photos.