User:Almondblossoms1890/Entenza House/Kcarreraholl Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Almondblossoms1890


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Almondblossoms1890/Entenza House


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
What has been created so far is very effective in giving the reader a vivid mental image of the house and its construction method. Relating the construction to another well known case study house is also very helpful in comparison. I have no suggestions for what could be done to improve this change, it is very well done!