User:Almostanne/The Woman's Building (Chicago)/BrittBardman Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Almostanne


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Almostanne/The Woman's Building (Chicago) - Wikipedia
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * The Woman's Building (Chicago) - Wikipedia
 * The Woman's Building (Chicago) - Wikipedia

Evaluate the drafted changes
Many valuable, verifiably accessible sources were added. Most of the additions were made to the decor section, which thanks to Almostanne's work is much more detailed.

The topics of the article (building, decor, exhibits) are well organized and none of the information is distracting from the main topic, The Woman's Building (Chicago). There is no particular bias apparent; all of the information and the information added is neutral and strictly factual.

I was sad to learn the Woman's Building was demolished as a part of the general Fair demolition. Although the article explains the effects this had on future feminism movements, no other group or viewpoint is underrepresented by any means.

I can't think of anything missing that could be added, and everything that was added is properly attributed to a reliable, unbiased source.