User:Along 2023/Consumer education/Cris Alexis Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?
 * - Along 2023


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * -Consumer education

Evaluate the drafted changes
- The article doesn't have a lot of information about the history of consumer education. The drafted changes do add to this. It mentions when it was founded and the originals goals of consumer education. The original article only mentions a few topics and the general area that are taught in schools. The drafted changes add more and are specific. This could be a good paragraph for the lead section or the background section. Something that can be improved is the second reference link. When I click the link it does not work. I'm not sure if I am the only one having that issue but I recommend double checking just in case.