User:Along 2023/Consumer education/Gmichellebow Peer Review

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Along2023 / Consumer Education


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Along 2023/Consumer education
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Consumer education

Evaluate the drafted changes
The article edits I am reviewing has some minor edits so far. For the lead, they could use more detail in the description of consumer education including a brief overview of the types of consumer education before going into them in depth. The content the group has added is relevant to consumer education because it talks about current things that Texas is trying to do to increase consumer education which is relevant. I'm not sure if the Australia point is relevant or if it just needs more in-depth information about it if they are going to talk about a different country and its processes with consumer education. I think there would be a different subheading for a different country. The content was up to date but it may be good to add more relevant articles to the types of consumer education. There is no biased information that they added for their edit but I do believe they could search for more references within the last 5-10 years to make the page more current as consumer education has most likely changed over the years. The added content is well-written and concise with the correct grammar and sentence structure. I think it would be beneficial to add images to show what consumer education is or go along with its history of it. I also believe that information could be added on the history of consumer economics and where the term was coined. I searched for it and learned that consumer education began in 1909 with the AAFCS founding which may be good information to add. Overall, I think it is just necessary to add more information and try to find more sources to help readers understand what consumer education really is.