User:Along 2023/Consumer education/VeronikaRoberts33 Peer Review

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Along2023 Consumer education


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 * User:Along 2023/Consumer education
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 * Consumer education

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This group has made small edits making it hard for us to peer review their work and has little content on the original article. So far, we have only made punctuational edits to their sandbox. We found that there was a lot of copy and paste information compared to quality paraphrasing or facts.

For their lead I believe they could add in more examples of what exactly consumer education is and a simpler version for all ages to understand. The definition is very vague and some might not know what some of the terms are as well. I also think that adding in some current topics of consumer education as subheadings would be beneficial and show how it is still a prevalent issue today. The content seems to be relevant and somewhat up to date, but it can go into more detail about the specifics of things like where and why it started. The tone and balance of the article is fairly equal and displays mostly basic information with little bias. I also think that they could find more up to date information on consumer education and its effects on today's society. Most of the sources are from books that were made decades ago so I think that it would be beneficial to increase their credibility. As I stated earlier, we already went in and edited their grammatical errors fixed their sentence structures. Adding images to their article will be beneficial to visual learners and might help them understand the topic more. As a new article, I think that there could be better structure to the page by adding subheadings and images, this would help the page flow more. It would also seem more reliable as it would have more information. Overall, I think that this article has potential to be a good article.