User:Alonsmith1/Evaluate an Article

Which article are you evaluating?
Elaine O'Neal (politician)

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
(Briefly explain why you chose it, why it matters, and what your preliminary impression of it was.)

The reason I chose this article was because it talks about the '''politician O'Neal. Elaine O'Neal''' is the city's first female African American and there aren't that many black mayors. The reason why it matters because they experience the issue of things that happened and they will know how to help and be right there to give you more detail on how to solve things and I feel like that why it matters. I didn't find anything negative about this mayor and I feel that there is not enough information about her and I don't have a preliminary impression of this but my impression of this was that she looks like a happy and sweet person and I feel like this mayor will help to change things for a better.

Evaluate the article
(Compose a detailed evaluation of the article here, considering each of the key aspects listed above. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what a useful Wikipedia article evaluation looks like.)

Overall impressions:

For overall impression, I think it's a 10 for me. I can't find anything wrong with this article and she seems like a happy and sweet person.

What is the article's overall status?

Her name is Elaine O'Neal and Elaine O'Neal is an American. attorney, academic administrator, judge, and politician who serves as the mayor of Durham, North Carolina. O'Neal was baptist and attendant First Calvary Baptist Church in Durham. She was a board member of Durham Made, a non-profit organization.

What are the article's strengths?

This article is giving strong women power and just giving more powerful movements.

How can the article be improved? I feel like she needs more supporters and just makes a few changes so things can be good.

How would you assess the article's completeness?

How she was telling what was right for her career. Elaine O'Neal supported the advocacy for same-sex adoption and LGBT rights.

I.e. is the article well- developed? Is it underdeveloped or poorly developed?

I feel that this article is well developed because it gives information about where she was born and how she became the city's first black mayor and more about her life story.