User:AloofBidoof/Lake Balaton/Fernandesi Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

AloofBidoof


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Lake Balaton Limnology section draft


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Lake Balaton

Evaluate the drafted changes
Lead Paragraphs

Organization
 * The information in the lead paragraphs is good.
 * Combine the 4 paragraphs into one. All the information relates to each other and can be combined together.
 * Your third lead paragraph could go right into the end of your first paragraph.
 * Make sure any information in your lead paragraph(s) are in the article


 * Add subsections for your different topics
 * For example, maybe one section is called Lake Characteristics
 * You've already got a good base.
 * Don't just list information under their links. You should summarize into a paragraph and cite them.
 * There should not be external links by themselves. They should be linked on words.
 * Add a References Header

Content


 * Your information on the physical characteristics is good. It adds to the original article page.
 * Add more information on the organisms inside the lake
 * Perhaps on the cyanobacteria for one, you already mention it briefly.
 * Are there phytoplankton? Is there a famous fish?
 * You will need more sources for the final product, but the ones you have look good.
 * I would maybe find another source in place of the Encyclopedia source, as it is a secondary source. It is a reliable one though, so it could be okay.
 * Your sources are relatively recent, too! Which is a good thing.
 * I appreciate the link to the Zala River.
 * Make sure to keep doing this!
 * Maybe Tihany Peninsula

Grammar / Spelling / etcetera


 * To make superscripts in Wikipedia Visual Editor, click the  A  at the top or use the keyboard shortcut Crtl+.
 * That will fix any of your areal units, like km2.
 * All your grammar and spelling look pretty good. Keep it up!