User:AloofBidoof/Lake Balaton/Katiebusch7 Peer Review

Hi Ricky,

Below are my comments on your first draft. Your current word count is 263 and you have 4 refs(3 scientific articles) I only counted the paragraphs at the beginning and the correctly cited refs at the bottom. You are short on length and articles so I am going to have to take off a points for each (-2 for length and -1 for missing a ref).

As for your intro this is a good intro section and reads well. I recommend you start moving onto the 4 required paragraphs of current research on Lake Balaton. AlsoI would try and link more words to your intro paragraph like Cyanobacteria etc.

-Katie

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