User:AloofBidoof/Lake Balaton/Maddyvotypka Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

(provide username) AloofBidoof


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:AloofBidoof/Lake_Balaton?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Lake Balaton

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

Lead
There is no lead included in this article yet.

Content
The content is relevant to the topic of Lake Balaton however there is some content that is repeated from the current version of the article such as how old this lake is. Since Lake Balaton already has a Wikipedia page make sure that you are not repeating information in a different way than the current article. The content does in fact cover a gap that is found in the current version of the article. The content however has less than 500 words.

Tone and Balance
The tone and balance of the content are neutral and there are no sentences that sound as if they have bias in them. However, I would just double check your spelling and tenses before turning this article in.

Sources and References
All of the new content that was added is backed up with a source. However there are only 4 sources currently when we needed 5. The links that were provided do work and take you to that article. I am not sure if you are able to use the britannica.com source because I believe our sources must be peer reviewed article. You should ask Katie or Lizzie about this source.

Organization
The content is well organized in the sense that each paragraph is a new topic within Limnology. The one suggestion I would make is you could add sub-headings to inform the reader what the topic is of each paragraph. This is going to be especially helpful as you keep adding information.

Images and Media
The article does include one image with a well written caption underneath it. Within the current version of the article there is a picture of the estuary of Zala but not the actual river. AloofBidoof has added an image of the Zala river in the Balaton area. The image is placed right next the paragraph that describes the Zala river and the importance it has on Lake Balaton.

Overall Impressions
The content that was created has improved the current article because the current article did not include a limnology section. A strength of this article is the information of the depth and surface area of Lake Balaton. Also, the content went more in depth with the association between Lake Balaton and the Zala river.