User:AloofCanine72/How Human Infrastructure Impacts Birds’ Ecosystem/Muhammadtoure1999 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

AloofCanine72, J-smoothe06, and SomeoneAverage


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:AloofCanine72/How_Human_Infrastructure_Impacts_Birds%E2%80%99_Ecosystem?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

This is a new article therefore the lead was created from scratch, However it does outline all the points discussed in the article. Their introductory sentence of the lead does not belong there because they cited research. I believe this should not be done in the introduction but rather in the body paragraphs. The lead does not describe the article's major sections. The information present in the lead can be seen all throughout the article. The lead is concise and straightforward. The content can be considered up to date because the information was taken from recent sources. The article's tone is neutral and it's content is backed up by reliable sources with authors that have an unbiased opinion about the topic. The article is well-written, well formatted and does not have a lot of grammatical errors. The article is lacking images but it's understandable since it's only a first draft.